Overall a nice story. To be honest, I did feel a little anxious reading it. But it would have been even better if you were more descriptive of the events, so that we could build a more precise image of the scenarios. In this case, I built the scenes on my

Kind of scary

I really think you have the basis for a good story. But you need to show and not tell. The dream scenes with the man and boy were good. But in each you could slip in a bit about what happened to the boy and his family. Example. first dream, save what you

nice story!!

The ghost of the past... tormenting the future!

It was a good story and also very scary.

nice story

Is it true story ? Where is this house situated in Chamba, Himachal Pradesh.

Interesting story but too many grammar errors to read smoothly, get some editing assistance.

A different, but spooky story. Good job Rehani...George

good work.. I really like the simplicity with which its written... good Job Ruhani..

thanx guys... I appreciate ur comments...:)

Brilliant, the best short story i have ever read :)

nice story..........

Nothing I haven't read before. The detail and suspense need to be there to make it something different and new.