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Chapter 1

She told the shopkeeper to keep the leftover change. Jai suddenly flipped around and saw her standing next to him. This happened near Vani Grocery Store, around 06:12 pm in the evening.

With her awkward glance, Pranavi almost made Jai's heart stop. In that moment, he was able to look directly into her eyes.

And they both went their separate ways.

That night, while getting ready to sleep, Jai asked his close friend about her. Raghu was shocked to hear Jai ask about a girl. Jai said, "I saw her today at Vani Store. She was wearing tight jeans and a plain white top. She was cute enough to follow... but her looks hit me right in the heart. I hope I see her tomorrow.

Listening to him, Raghu thought, "Something is definitely coming our way", and both slipped into sleep.

Next day,

They saw her coming along with her friends. Both quickly turned their faces towards the store. She came in and asked the shopkeeper for her favorite chocolates. She didn't noticed them and left.

They both remained silent for a minute and apologized to their self-respect.

Again the next day, Jai stood at the same spot, She came, picked up her chocolates, and left again. And this routine continued for almost a month.

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Alberta Abena Kunadu Owusu

Jun 30, 2025

A sweet and relatable start that builds quiet tension, but adding more depth to Pranavi’s character would make the story even more engaging.

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Divine

Jun 29, 2025

Nice story.I like it

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Ashwini Praveen

Jun 28, 2025

Very different and good narration

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