The Way to Hell

Horror | 22nd Dec 2011|6 min read

eddywalker

A lost, cold, hungry soldier wanders through a deathly silent valley, haunted by a beast.


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  • eddywalker

    27th Dec

    thanks

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  • 27th Dec

    Good story...well written and i love this story...

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  • 27th Dec

    very interesting story.. :)

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  • barun

    26th Dec

    A lot of lines in the early paragraphs started with "He"s. But the last paragrapgh was awesome

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  • 25th Dec

    Dude, loved your story, Great imagery,,keep it up

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  • eddywalker

    26th Dec

    there are a lot of "he"s in the last paragraph as well. i just didn't wanna name 'him' coz he could be anybody (maybe the reader) and the only concrete character in the story is the devil in the form of the wolf. i like the paragraph when he smokes the la

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  • 25th Dec

    thats a very interesting story...

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  • eddywalker

    24th Dec

    thank you. my stories sometimes seem incomplete as if they were a part of a bigger story but that's coz i write most of them in one sitting. but i'm glad that some people like them

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  • Ruhani

    23rd Dec

    AWwwwwww!!!! what a story....u are an amazing writer...keep up the good work...

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  • 23rd Dec

    impressive... i liked the title which suits the story exactly... :)

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