A lost, cold, hungry soldier wanders through a deathly silent valley, haunted by a beast.
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Jed Relativo Jr.
Good story...well written and i love this story...
very interesting story.. :)
A lot of lines in the early paragraphs started with "He"s. But the last paragrapgh was awesome
Dude, loved your story, Great imagery,,keep it up
there are a lot of "he"s in the last paragraph as well. i just didn't wanna name 'him' coz he could be anybody (maybe the reader) and the only concrete character in the story is the devil in the form of the wolf. i like the paragraph when he smokes the la
thats a very interesting story...
thank you. my stories sometimes seem incomplete as if they were a part of a bigger story but that's coz i write most of them in one sitting. but i'm glad that some people like them
AWwwwwww!!!! what a story....u are an amazing writer...keep up the good work...
impressive... i liked the title which suits the story exactly... :)