Wow. Someone once said in a good story the hero has to die. Excellent loved it
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Good Work Petah.. I read your story and i never felt a single moment that this is first story by its author.
Very nice & different way to assemble all the words together & portray a story like this. I must say, its an interesting story and will
This is my first story, I have dared to put on the internet for everyone to read. I would be ecstatic to hear from those who read it all the way through. All comments whether critical or positive are welcomed :)