The Mark

Romance | Apr 14, 2013 | 22 min read
6 Votes, average: 5 out of 5
Romance

The Mark

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Barry.Murphy Apr 30, 2013

Wow. Someone once said in a good story the hero has to die. Excellent loved it

Apr 23, 2013

Good Work Petah.. I read your story and i never felt a single moment that this is first story by its author. Very nice & different way to assemble all the words together & portray a story like this. I must say, its an interesting story and will

Petah Apr 17, 2013

Hello everyone! This is my first story, I have dared to put on the internet for everyone to read. I would be ecstatic to hear from those who read it all the way through. All comments whether critical or positive are welcomed :) Thx!

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