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Adventure | 7th Apr 2017|4 min read

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  • Lucas Barstow

    12th Apr

    Good story, and I liked the way it didn't end with the boring all a dream idea, having the bottle reappear was a good twist on a clich. To try and be constructive, I'll say that you should proofread but good content and errors are minor. Well done.

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