the map

Adventure | Apr 7, 2017 | 4 min read
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Lucas Barstow Apr 12, 2017

Good story, and I liked the way it didn't end with the boring all a dream idea, having the bottle reappear was a good twist on a cliché. To try and be constructive, I'll say that you should proofread but good content and errors are minor. Well done.

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