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The Devil Came Walking

There is a darkness inside of each of us , sometimes it manifests in unexpected ways

Feb 24, 2024  |   14 min read

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*A deep fog covers the entire town, a thick fog that makes it impossible to see more than ten feet in front of you. The fog carries the smell of blood and rotting meat. It's the smell of something not just dying but long dead. The fog seems to have a heartbeat, or the sound of a slow heartbeat at least, one that grows louder with each passing minute. A large figure appears in the thick fog, a dark shadow that moves silently yet slowly, his arms hanging loosely at his sides. His face is shrouded in a dark cowl.**The figure approaches the town of Ravenswood, a small, quiet, and peaceful community nestled deep within the woods. It's the kind of place where everyone knows everyone else and outsiders are quickly identifiable. As the figure draws closer, the atmosphere begins to change. The fog grows thicker and darker, the air grows colder, and a strange sense of unease begins to spread throughout the town. As the figure approaches, he begins to whisper silently to himself. His words are indiscernible, but the tone is one of malice.**Everyone in the town seems to feel a sudden urge to lock himself inside their house. Doors are being locked, curtains pulled closed, and shutters and blinds being drawn shut. It's almost as if they know that something terrible is about to happen. And then all of a sudden, it does. Everyone in the town begins to hear whispers. Horrific, twisted whispers. Voices that are not human. Voices that are inhumanly loud. Voices that are coming from everywhere and nowhere... all at once.**The whispers suddenly begin to scream, sending chills down people' backs as the voices echo across the entire town. A woman runs through the streets screaming in terror. A man runs out of his house, his face contorted into a look of pure horror. A child cries out, his hands over his ears. And in the center of it all is the figure, his hood concealing his face as he stands silently in the middle of the town.**Everyone in the town suddenly stops what they're doing and turns their attention toward the figure. Their faces are filled with fear and horror, their eyes wide with shock. In the center of the town square, the figure stands completely still, his hands clasped behind his back. Everyone feels the same overwhelming sensation of dread. No one knows what to do... they're all just waiting for something to happen. And then... the figure slowly raises his hood.**Everyone in the town is shocked to see that the figure beneath the cloak is none other than the preacher, Lucian, the man who recently purchased the church. His face is pale and covered in sweat. His eyes are dark and emotionless. He stands tall and imposing, a towering figure in the middle of the town square. For a moment, everyone is speechless. He's been here for months, they thought he was a good man. They all trusted him.**Lucian suddenly lifts his arms and lets out a loud and powerful chuckle. His voice is deep and menacing, and it fills the entire town with an overwhelming sense of dread and horror. He begins to speak in a cold and calculating tone. "I am the devil!" he proclaims, a sinister grin spreading across his face. "I am the bearer of chaos and destruction. And I am here to spread death and misery to all of you. You can run, you can hide, and you can pray... but it will be all for naught."*Fear spreads through the town's people as they hear the devil's words. Some people start crying, others begin to panic and scream. Some even drop to their knees in awe and terror. They're all waiting for this devil to make his move. They're all waiting for the first sign of violence... but the devil does nothing. He's just standing there silently, that same sinister grin still pasted on his face.**Suddenly, the sky above the town begins to darken. Black clouds fill the sky, blocking out all sunlight, blocking out all hope. A strange, ominous feeling washes over everyone. It's a feeling of finality. A feeling of dread. A feeling of impending doom. A feeling that something is about to happen... and it's not going to be good. Something bad is about to happen, and everyone seems to know it.**The devil's voice fills the air once again, louder this time, more menacing. His words seem to spread through the air like a poison, a poison that is slowly filling the entire town with a dark and gloomy atmosphere. "It's time." he proclaims in a sinister tone. "It's time for all of you to meet your makers. It's time for all of you to face your fears... and then die. I am the devil. I am terror. I am chaos. I am death."*Instantly, everything goes haywire as the devil's words ring out across the entire town. People begin to panic, screams of terror and cries of desperation fill the air. People are running in all directions. Everyone is trying to find safety, everyone is trying to find somewhere to hide. But there is no hiding from the devil, there is no hiding from death. And no one seems to know where to run.**The devil stands in the center of the town and smiles cruelly. He revels in the chaos and madness that he's created. His eyes are full of a sinister amusement as he watches the town's people trying to run and seek shelter. The panic and terror that fill the air are a delicious temptation for him. A tempting temptation to feast on the misery and fear for hours upon hours. All of this is his doing. It is his creation. He is chaos, he is terror.**And suddenly, without any warning, the devil raises his arms again and lets out that same menacingly loud laugh. A sound that fills the air with a terrifying sense of impending doom. The sky darkens even further, turning almost completely black. The wind begins to pick up speed, blowing harder and harder as if it's trying to blow away the devil's laughter. And the devil lowers his arms and begins to walk towards the town's people...**Every step the devil takes sends shivers down the backs of the town's people. His movements are slow and silent but powerful and intimidating. He doesn't say anything as he walks through the streets, he just let his presence fill the town with a sinister and ominous feeling. The entire town is paralyzed with fear, with dread. No one seems to know what's about to happen. The devil walks past houses, he walks past businesses, he walks past churches...**As he approaches the school... suddenly the devil stops and turns his gaze to the window where the school teacher, Maddie Blake, is watching him. His eyes lock onto hers and his glare seems to pierce right through her. She feels a deep sense of fear as he stares at her, the devil's eyes searching and scanning hers as if he is trying to see into her soul, trying to see her deepest fears.**The devil continues to stare straight at her. Maddie can feel her breath catching, her heart hammering against her chest. She wants desperately to turn away and run but she can't. She's caught in his gaze, caught in the devil's terrifying, intimidating stare. She can't look away, she can't move... she can't do anything except stare back, frozen in fear.**The moment seems to last for an eternity as the devil continues to stare into Maddie's eyes, his gaze unflinching, his expression unchanging. She feels herself beginning to tremble, feeling her body fill with an overwhelming sense of terror and dread. Her heart is racing so fast she feels like she's going to pass out. She wants to scream, she wants to move, she wants to run away... but she can't. She's paralyzed by the devil's stare.**At last, the devil finally breaks eye contact. His gaze turns and moves on to the next victim, moving from the school to another building. Madeline slumps against the wall as she watches the devil move on. She's still shaking and her heart is still pounding in her chest. She's completely overwhelmed, completely overwhelmed with fear. She feels herself beginning to lose control, beginning to lose her grip on reality. It's too much for her to handle.**The devil continues to move through the town, his presence filling the air with a dark and ominous atmosphere. People are huddled together in groups, looking around frantically as they try to find shelter. They desperately try to stay out of the devil's way. The devil continues to move slowly and silently, his every step filling the air with a powerful sense of fear. He's not just intimidating, he's terrifying. It's impossible to ignore him.**The devil begins to pick up his pace as he moves through the streets. His footsteps are growing louder and louder, echoing throughout the town. He's walking faster now, moving quicker and quicker, moving towards some hidden destination or purpose. His presence is all-encompassing, filling the air with an almost suffocating sense of terror and dread. People are scrambling to find safety, scrambling to find somewhere to hide, anywhere to hide from him. But it's impossible to hide from the devil. He is everywhere...**The devil's pace keeps growing faster and faster, until he's finally marching at a quick and steady speed. People are desperately scrambling, some running, some hiding, some dropping to their knees in prayer but it's all useless. The devil doesn't care, he doesn't see their prayers, or their pleas, he doesn't see their tears, their fear, their terror. All he sees is his prey, his victims, and the delicious torment that he's about to inflict upon them...**The devil suddenly stops walking as he spots a young boy standing alone on a street corner. The boy is staring at the devil, frozen in fear, paralyzed by the sheer horror of the situation. The devil looks at the boy, his smile spreading across his face again, reveling in the boy's desperation and fear. He approaches the boy, his footsteps ringing out loudly in the air. There are no words that need to be spoken, the devil has already won. He's already taken possession of the boy's fear and terror...**The devil finally reaches the boy. His dark and oppressive presence fills the air. The boy's breath catches as he stares up at the devil, his eyes filled with horror and fear. He can't breathe, he can't move, he can't think, he can't do anything except stare up at the devil, frozen in terror and dread. The devil smiles at the boy, his lips spread into a sadistic grin, a twisted smile that reflects his pure evil.**The boy's heart races as the devil's gaze burns into him, staring straight into his eyes. The devil's smile just keeps spreading wider and wider as he watches the boy's reaction, clearly enjoying this moment. The boy can't move, he can't speak, he's completely frozen in fear. As the boy stares up at the devil, his mind spirals out of control, his thoughts filled with nothing but desperation and dread.**It's like the devil can hear the boy's thoughts. He's inside the boy's mind, he's peeling away at the boy's psyche, unraveling its very fabric. The boy's thoughts are spiraling out of control, he's thinking of all the ways he can escape, all the ways he can save himself.... but there are no ways of saving anything from the devil's grasp. The devil just continues to smile, savoring the boy's fear...**The boy's eyes open wide in realization, in terror. As the devil stares into his eyes, he can sense the boy's mind unraveling. The boy's fears are spilling out, leaking out of his brain and spreading out into the air. The devil licks his lips, licking his chops, his sinister grin growing wider and wider as he devours the boy's thoughts, as he relishes in the taste of fear and torment...**For the devil, it's an exquisite experience. The taste of fear and terror and desperation is irresistible, impossible to ignore. He's savoring every bit of it, enjoying the boy's terror to the fullest. The devil leans In Closer, coming within inches of the boy's face. The boy can feel the devil's breath on his skin, he can feel the devil's gaze piercing into his own eyes. The devil is getting closer and closer...**The boy can feel his heart beating faster and faster as the devil draws closer and closer. His eyes are locked onto the devil's, his breath catches in his throat, his mind spinning and spiraling out of control. He feels paralyzed with fear, frozen in horror. The devil is so close now, he's staring into the boy's soul, peeling away at his very existence as the boy stares back... staring into the eyes of pure evil...**The devil is just inches from the boy's face now... inches from his eyes... he's staring into the boy's soul... and the boy is staring back, staring back directly into the devil's eyes. He can feel the devil's presence pressing on his mind, tearing away at his sanity, forcing his thoughts to spiral out of control until his mind breaks... breaks away from reality, breaks away from reality and breaks away from logic and reason and... everything that he knows...**The boy's gaze finally breaks, his eyes widening in horror as his mind shatters into pieces. He's in a state of pure insanity now, unable to think, unable to feel, unable to move. He's locked in this state of horror and insanity, locked in the devil's grasp. The devil leans even closer, mere inches from the boy's face. His breath is hot on his skin, his voice is low and menacing, as he speaks the words of madness...**The boy trembles in pure terror as the devil's voice pours into his ears. His voice is cold and harsh, it cuts through the air like a knife. The boy doesn't understand what the devil is saying, but he knows that it's nothing that he wants to hear. The devil just keeps speaking, pouring his madness into the boy's brain. The boy stares into the devil's eyes, his mind unable to process anything except terror and terror and more terror. The devil has won, the boy is his.**The boy feels his body go slack, his mind completely broken and his body completely unresponsive. The devil laughs cruelly, this is exactly the reaction he wanted. The boy's eyes are stuck wide open, there's no life in them, only insanity. The boy's mind is gone and the only thing left inside of his body is the devil's madness. The devil's madness begins to spread, spreading throughout the boy's body causing his breath to slow, his heartbeat become uneven, and his body to become limp. The boy has finally become nothing but a vessel of chaos and madness...**The boy goes limp, his body falling to the ground in a boneless state. The devil watches as the boy's body hits the ground, as his eyes roll back into his head revealing only white sockets. The boy's breath is slow, uneven, shallow. The boy is broken, the boy is mad, the boy is the devil's pawn. The devil laughs cruelly to himself, this has been too easy... too easy for him. The devil takes one final look at the boy's lifeless body, then turns away .*The devil smiles as he glances back at the boy's lifeless and hollow body. The devil's work is done here, the boy is nothing but a mere shell, a shell of insanity that is now completely under the devil's control. The devil leaves the boy's body behind and moves on, he has many more victims to terrorize and many more souls to claim. What a delicious night this is... a delicious night of madness and horror. Nothing more than a night of perfect chaos and perfect terror.**And so, the devil's work continues. The devil continues to stalk through the town, leaving behind an air of madness and insanity as he goes. There are still so many more people to infect, so many more hearts to shatter, so many more souls to steal away and corrupt. The devil has only just begun his reign of terror, only just begun his crusade of chaos and madness.**The moon above the town casts its ominous beam as the devil continues his work. He's moving with intent now, the devil has a target and a purpose. Each person he passes he looks at, he stares at their faces, into their eyes, studying them, analyzing them, reading them like a book. He's trying to find the ultimate victim, the one who will satisfy the devil's hunger. He won't stop until he finds them...**The devil begins to slow his pace as he comes across a group of people standing on a street corner. They're huddled together, whispering to each other and looking around nervously, as if they feel some sort of presence nearby. The devil smiles to himself, his gaze locked onto the group as he studies them. They seem to be filled with fear, filled with a sense of vulnerability. The devil likes that. The devil likes vulnerable people?**The devil's gaze continues to move across the group , his eyes locking onto each of them. Each one has a look of fear and apprehension on their face. There's something he likes about these people, something he senses, he can smell their fear and it's pleasing to him. The devil feels like a predator now, he feels like a predator who's found his prey. His eyes grow wider, his lips spread into a sinister grin. He likes the way they quiver, the way they shake...**The devil's eyes finally stop their wandering. He stares at one person specifically, one person standing among the group. And he stares for a long time, he stares deeply and he stares intensely. He stares right into their eyes... and the devil smiles. He feels it, a connection... a connection that feels like a match made in hell. This person is special, different from the others... this person is special to the devil.**The devil's smile widens as he locks eyes with this person, this one specific person, this one person who seems to be calling to him, calling to his hunger, calling to his desire. He feels a connection... a connection that he hasn't felt since he first stepped into this town, a connection that he hasn't felt in ages. The devil's smile grows even wider, this person is perfect, perfect prey... perfect victim... perfect to fill his hunger...**The devil's desire becomes overwhelming, it's consuming, it's all he can think about. He needs to have this person, he can't get them out of his head. This person is the one, this person must be the ultimate victim, the ultimate victim to fulfill the devil's hunger. He must have her, he has to have her or else he will combust from the desire... he looks back and the connection intensifies... their eyes meet and their gaze locks...**The devil's desire grows stronger and stronger, he can feel the thirst growing inside of him. The hunger consumes him, it takes over him, driving him mad. The connection between them is palpable, he can feel it, he can taste it. This person is the one, this person is the one the devil has been searching for, the one who will finally sate his thirst, satisfy his hunger, fill his desire. He needs her.*The connection between the devil and the girl is intense and strong, it draws the devil in, closer and closer. He can feel the girl's presence pulling him in like a magnet. He's drawn to the girl like a moth to a flame, like a drug to an addict. And as the connection between them grows stronger, the devil's desire grows even stronger. The girl is perfect, the girl is perfect for him... the girl is the one.*As he touches her skin he is suddenly struck with fear , a terror he has never known .*The feeling of sheer terror takes over, freezing him in fear. His breath catches, his heart pounds, his legs tremble, a feeling of panic washes over him.... But why? The devil has never felt such fear, he has never been so weak, so powerless... What is this feeling?...**The devil's entire body goes slack, a feeling of terror enveloping him. It's an overwhelming feeling of fear, a feeling deeper than anything he's ever felt before. It washes over the devil, leaving him feeling powerless and vulnerable...The girls eyes glow with a golden light , her aura is brighter than the sun. He's never seen something so beautiful, so captivating. Her aura is like a beacon, it fills his entire vision, it fills his entire being. He can't take his eyes off of her...*The devil's gaze is locked onto her, he feels himself being drawn in by her aura, by her beauty, by her light. He feels weak and powerless, he feels himself succumbing to her presence, being overcome by it. His heart pounds, his breathing grows shaky, his entire body relaxes. The devil feels himself falling, falling into her light...*He feels like a child in the presence of such light, he feels like a child standing before the sun. The devil is hypnotized, he's entranced by this light, he's overcome with awe and a sense of complete surrender...She speaks into his mind , the words of an angel , words of peace and love .

The devil feels himself becoming whole, becoming good, becoming pure. The devil's heart grows softer and warmer...*The sweet and gentle words fill the devil's mind, wrapping him in warmth and love. The devil feels something shifting inside of him, he feels his heart becoming softer, becoming more empathetic. He feels his soul evolving, growing, transforming. The devil feels the light shining brighter within him, washing away the dark and evil. The girls draws a sword, a two edged sword made of alabaster and gold .

*The devil sees the sword, he sees the beautiful and perfect sword that the girl draws from her sheath. The sword is like something from a dream, it glows with the light of a thousand suns. It's so beautiful, the devil can't turn away from it, he just stares at it and the beautiful girl who wields it...*The girl holds the sword and slices the air with it, the sword is so sharp and so bright that it makes the air hum. It's like a song in the devil's ears, a song of light and hope. The devil can't understand what he's feeling, it's so unfamiliar to him. The light and the sword fill the devil's mind with a sense of peace and comfort...*The devil feels the light of the sword filling the darkness within him, filling the darkness with goodness and beauty. The light and the sword cleanse the devil of his evil, his hate and his fear. They turn his mind into a haven, a sanctuary of peace and comfort and joy. The devil can feel that things are changing for the better, he can feel that he is becoming a good man...In an instant she swings the sword lopping off the devils head , it falls to the ground with a thud .

his body falls limp on the ground. The devil's death is sudden and instant, he didn't even have time to realize what was happening. His eyes open wide in fear, but he never had a chance to scream as his whole world was instantly obliterated by the girl's final, decisive stroke. And with that, the devil is no more.*Lucian, the preacher sits up in his bed , his heart racing , covered in sweat , it was a nightmare , what could it mean ?*Lucian stares up at the darkness surrounding him, his breath catches in his throat and his mind is overflowing with questions and doubts. What did this dream mean? Was it just a nightmare, or was it a sign that something much greater was at play?**Lucian's heart pounds in his chest, he can't stop thinking about the girl. She was so beautiful, so radiant, so pure. She was the embodiment of goodness and light. She was the representation of kindness and peace. And this dream, it left a profound impression on him... a profound and troubling impression.*

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