"His vitals are unstable, and the source of the infection is... unconventional," Dr. Mark Thompson briefed Lily as ...
When a young man falls gravely ill from a mysterious infection, Dr. Lily Harris-Flash, an infectious disease specialist, uncovers a hidden world within the human navel. As she delves deeper, she discovers that the bacteria residing in our belly buttons are not as benign as once thought. This medical thriller explores the uncharted territories of the human microbiome, revealing secrets that challenge the very essence of medical science.
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Not enough of the story.... it pulls the readers in but doesn't hold them. Maybe if you ended with saying: "they were shocked from their findings" or "it was nothing they had ever seen," then I would have given it a 4 star because I would want to read more. I didn't want to rate it because I thought maybe you were still working on it, but every little bit of information helps.
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Thank you for your honest feedback! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I see your point about the ending, and I’ll definitely keep that in mind for future stories. Your suggestion is really helpful, and I’m always looking to improve. Thanks again for your support—I hope you’ll check out more of my work in the future!