I love it! Your description of the characters - even the kleptomaniac main character was aptly described. Awesome!
Haha thanks! I need to work on my editing skills, but I hate rereading my work, it embarrasses me for some reason! But thank you anyway:)
Great story! I laughed out loud at the end. The details are wonderful.
The errors in punctuation and spelling are distracting though.
Awesome story....crisp and interesting.....
Your story is crisp, characters are real and above all you are unstoppable with your wit. You are a natural storyteller and humour is your strength. -UThaker