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Wonderfully vibrant and visual writing. Engaging from beginning to end.
Nice tension. I was hoping for a better ending, and I think it müst have happened. It's hard for me to read a story aboüt mürder. By better ending, I don't mean yoür ending wasn't satisfying. It was.
I liked the twist.
nice story, i like it.
thts a nice story but little sad too... Especially the ending was little depressive but too gud. In the whole script i felt like jumping inside nd rescue the person... Suspense made me curious all d time as wht next.... Keep writing!!!!