QUEEN:
The time for death of my daughter Patina has arrived, I have met up with Vox, I must say, he revealed things that are shocking, things I never knew they existed, but that does not mean I cannot kill my own daughter I am and it breaks me but how should it break me? She took a life at such young age, going against all the things I taught her. The elders with thier warriors stood around a pole that had my child hanged in, her hands tied above her head, and her feet tied together before being knotted against the pole, all day she had been like this, sun burned her, her mouth dry and bluish or blackish, her eyes baggy and dark circles around,I have never seen something like this before. We the pole is pivoted on the ground, it was circled with wheat grass, that covered wood, so she gets to be burned? That's not the plan we agreed on.
"Elder, this is not the plan" I said, "you not the queen, we've changed few rules," one of the elders said, "she deserves to die, a slowly, painful death," he added, making my eyes teary, No! My child deserves to die in one go, I am the mother I am suppose to decide, "you get to set her on fire," the same elder concluded, there was no irony about today, but what can I say, they are my people, we can change our minds and use law just to get what we want, but that's okay, I walked slowly forward, to my half awake daughter, with rigged breaths, she had blisters and scars of a scorpion bites, that I completely forgot, she must be in so much pain there's so much of them. We were rounded by poles that were burning and I took one of them to my right hand then I walked up to the spot of death, I faced the pole done to the poles covered with wheat grass and I set them ablaze, my child, my child is going to be burned alive, I burned her, there's nothing I could do with people of my villagers here to see if everything is done.
"What is that?!" One of the warriors screamed, as my child's Frey start to feel the heat of a growing fire and she whimpered, I turned to look at the direction of what the warriors were point at, the night sky was being polluted my a dark smoke, coming from........then we heard screams, the villagers, my village was on fire and before I know it, we ran towards it all of us leaving my daughter to get burned, then halted while others pass me, charging for the village people I look back to my daughter who screamed for me, I ran back quickly, there was no water to stop the fire and I took this chance before rushing back,
"Patina my daughter I love you. May I see you on the next life." I bowed as her screams increased, then sprinted back to my people,turning a blind eye and deaf ears to my daughter.
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Narrated:
Vox appeared as soon as everyone has cleared up, he did not appear alone, he appeared with his kind, but they his thier face like he did, he wore a dark cloak that sweeps the ground, while others fetched water to the nearby river, the others remove the burning poles with sticks and unused wood, the child still screamed in pain, her sole feet have peeled, black and red, with boiling blisters, once the pole was no more on fire, the others dug the ground, while others pushed the pole to fall to the ground, but so ever slightly as they never let it fall abruptly the held it till it lay slowly down. Once that was done, they untied her, as she screamed, silently all her screams were making noise among Vox and his people, they carried her towards the water, and once they reached at the shore, they climbed on a boat with her, and while the the villagers try to put the fire out, Patina was speared from her death, as she screamed under the night sky on a day of a full moon, "well, there's so much life has in store for you Patina and Deci, and this was the end of your first chapter, let's go to the second chapter of your life." Vox whispered as he hushed her, screaming and crying from the pain on her feet.
Please give me your honest opinion thank you