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Notice Things, They Change You

Jan 27, 2012 | 2 min read
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Mar 29, 2012

I love the message of this story. It is far better to focus on the good things in life than to always look at the bad--even when we have to look hard for them. Life is so much richer than our daily existance often reveals.

Mar 27, 2012

I'll try to be a little more helpful than folks past. It's good, the visual and emotional detail are great, but the presentation of those ideas is holding it back. It doesn't quite flow naturally. Keep working because I love these kinds of stories.

Feb 3, 2012

Very well written story.....:)

Feb 1, 2012

Nice Story.... :)

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