Notice Things, They Change You

Others | 27th Jan 2012|2 min read

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  • loril

    29th Mar

    I love the message of this story. It is far better to focus on the good things in life than to always look at the bad--even when we have to look hard for them. Life is so much richer than our daily existance often reveals.

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  • illustrated18

    27th Mar

    I'll try to be a little more helpful than folks past. It's good, the visual and emotional detail are great, but the presentation of those ideas is holding it back. It doesn't quite flow naturally. Keep working because I love these kinds of stories.

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  • 3rd Feb

    Very well written story.....:)

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  • 1st Feb

    Nice Story.... :)

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  • 1st Feb

    Excellent, very interesting story. keep writing.

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  • 31st Jan

    I agree with you. It is really good story. I read all story.. well done work weseektheomissions...........

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  • Ruhani

    28th Jan

    Nice story...

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