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very good story
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Love the story very very good.
a good story... :)
you are welcome Aubreegrace.... ll wait for your next story ans surely gv my viewpoints... Evn m going to write a story soon... lets see hw its come...
amazing story. have penned down vry nicely and differently... every moment and situation was framed so perfectly that i felt like m watching some movie... gud wrk...
Beautiful story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Great writing!
Very nice story..
Loved it! Good job!
Great story keep up the good writing.
Sure thing Aubree. Happy writing.
The first few paragraphs are in present tense. Then it suddenly switches past tense. Then onwards, there's a mix of past and present. There's no harm in healthy criticism. Right?
This is for barun, I read this story a couple times and I have to say that I disagree with your comment. I think that it is a very well written story that keeps your attention from beginning to end. I didn't see any unstable sentence structures. Curious t
The sentence structure seems to swing haphazardly between present tense and past tense. Not that I'm a perfect writer myself, but there should have been a stable sentence structure. Good effort none the less.
I appreciate all the reviews. Thank You. The story that has been the biggest hit is "Dare to Marry a Stranger." I've had reviews from readers where they have said the story felt so real to them like "this could happen to me" that it made them, remove thei
I like how the story kept my attention and I didn't want to put it down for a minute. Very good. I will definitely read more of your stories.
very nice story..
This is a good story about how Greed can change a family and friends too. I really liked this story.
Oh its a very good story.. and very well written
I hope everyone enjoys this Story. I did have to cut out some of the story, so that it could be accepted for viewing.