Romance

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Aug 24, 2012 | 4 min read
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Aug 29, 2012

nice story..... the part I like is the last one when the boy came to know that it was 1st april :D

Aug 29, 2012

Great story sreejz.. keep writing.. good luck.. :)

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Sam.Cuch

Aug 25, 2012

Ahhh... Moments of serendipity. They always make for a good story. But It would have help in the tension if you dragged on a little more. But I'm a believer in heavy contrast to create a better moment of release for the reader. Anyways good story, keep wr

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