Eddy Walker: What an utterly charming piece. Your descriptive powers are superb. I was there and felt what the old man felt as well as what the children were feeling from the beginning to the end.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Eddy thats a very nice story.. and very well written too... Just confused on one part.. In second last paragraph was it intentional of you to reveal the death of the old man, as written "On the day when old man Rusty died". If yes, then why?
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An awesome.... one of the finest story among all ur work... so touching and so different... loved it thoroughly.. keep it upo mr eddywalker...:)