eddywalker

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  • eddywalker May 15th2018
    the black hole

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Tragedy | 5 Comments

    this one was just an experiment with symbolism but i'm glad you people like it. thanks

  • eddywalker May 15th2018
    joint session 2

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 7 Comments

    thank you

  • eddywalker Apr 24th2012
    The Mysterious Girl: A Doppelgänger Tale

    burneymac29 Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 7 Comments

    It's a well written story. Nice work. Keep writing.

  • eddywalker Apr 5th2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    thanks

  • eddywalker Apr 1st2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    yes you are right. this story needs this ending.

  • eddywalker Apr 1st2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    thanks ruhani. i used to think that depressive endings are not such a bad thing but i realise that people read to be entertained and it's not a good idea to leave them depressed. i will try to make better endings from now on that leave the readers with ho

  • eddywalker Mar 30th2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    i'll take that as a complement

  • eddywalker Mar 28th2012
    Ghosts don't exist

    eddywalker Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Horror | 7 Comments

    thank you nitika and priyanka

  • eddywalker Mar 28th2012
    how old man rusty died

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 9 Comments

    thank you priyanka and amit

  • eddywalker Mar 28th2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    thanks amit

  • eddywalker Mar 27th2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    they say that endings should not be sad. that even sad stories should have a happy ending. or at least a ray of hope at the end that makes the reader feel that everything gets better in the future. but while writing this story i didn't want to do that. i

  • eddywalker Mar 17th2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    it's a tragedy.

  • eddywalker Jan 2nd2012
    how old man rusty died

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 9 Comments

    yes it was intentional as even the title of the story reveals his death. i was trying to get the reader to think that maybe rusty dies because of what the kids do to him. there has been a study on child soldiers which says that children are capable of doi

  • eddywalker Jan 1st2012
    how old man rusty died

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 9 Comments

    thanks rimzhim

  • eddywalker Dec 27th2011
    the way to hell

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    14Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    thanks

  • eddywalker Dec 27th2011
    the attic

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 7 Comments

    thanks everyone

  • eddywalker Dec 26th2011
    the way to hell

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    14Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    there are a lot of "he"s in the last paragraph as well. i just didn't wanna name 'him' coz he could be anybody (maybe the reader) and the only concrete character in the story is the devil in the form of the wolf. i like the paragraph when he smokes the la

  • eddywalker Dec 24th2011
    Father and son

    barun Jan 16th2018

    19Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 12 Comments

    very interesting read. it's not much of a story in itself and seems to be a part of a bigger story like a lot of my stories. i guess that's why i like it! but seriously well written especially if you don't have a son in real life. good questions asked. qu

  • eddywalker Dec 24th2011
    the way to hell

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    14Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    thank you. my stories sometimes seem incomplete as if they were a part of a bigger story but that's coz i write most of them in one sitting. but i'm glad that some people like them

  • eddywalker Dec 20th2011
    joint session

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 4 Comments

    this story actually is based on a personal experience. it's just two guys getting high and talking rubbish. there's not much to it except an attempt at describing how it feels to get high. i have written another story called joint session 2 which hopefull

  • eddywalker Dec 20th2011
    the attic

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 7 Comments

    there are hints in the story that edwards is schizophrenic and george is his imaginary friend. that and a lot of symbolism.

  • eddywalker Dec 20th2011
    Ghosts don't exist

    eddywalker Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Horror | 7 Comments

    thanks guys

  • eddywalker Dec 17th2011
    In Another Life

    irishgirl Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 14 Comments

    wonderfully written. emotions expressed very nicely. characters were very real as well. the most important part of any tragedy is the little bits of happiness here and there that later make the pain real and those little bits were very nicely written like

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