Thank you, Mehran!!! I also like reality in fiction.
Hey Guys!!! Please do comment. I look forward to reading your insights and thoughts on the above short story.
Dear Priyanka, Thank you for taking the time to critique it and giving me such support. I am interested to know if the twist at the end, although subtle, had worked. Did you suspected that she was pregnant and what did you think, it had happened to Helen
Hello everyone! This is my first story, I have dared to put on the internet for everyone to read. I would be ecstatic to hear from those who read it all the way through. All comments whether critical or positive are welcomed :) Thx!
good read. thank you.