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    uthaker wrote a new post, Take My Coat 5 months ago

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    “Inmates of Bay,” he watched the cluster of syllables scrolling off the prompter like runaway rascals and the intern news reporter, under the spell of an email he had read minutes earlier, […]

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    uthaker wrote a new post, Take My Coat (Revised final) 5 months ago

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    “Inmates of ” A cluster of words scrolled off the teleprompter like runaway rascals. “Cut! cut, cut,” said Buxton.

    “You should read the script.” The anchor pulled out a brush and […]

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    uthaker and Profile picture of %sgeedda are now friends 7 months, 3 weeks ago

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    uthaker commented on the post, The Blundering Baker 11 months, 3 weeks ago

    George,
    I like your smooth flowing style of tale telling. I enjoyed your story!
    UThaker

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago

    I want to say a sincere thanks to SSL Owners, Editors and Administrators for doing such a wonderful job and keeping the free content afloat.

    The team at SSL is what one would hope at any magazine and […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago

    Hi Anita,
    I cannot thank you enough for your help shaping this story. Thank you for your praise and I want to improve to be worthy of it – I promise I will get there.

    The latest version of Take My Coat is […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Shit ! I fell in love again…(and again …& again…..& again…) 1 year ago

    Hello Surabhi,
    I liked your story!
    - Opening was good
    - Liked the end with a honest words of wisdom
    - Character seems real
    - Your tale telling flows well!

    If you want to make it a fictionalized short […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago

    Thank you so much Amandablair for your encouraging words music to my ears. Any other feedback to embellish my story will be greatly appreciated. Feedback in some of the following will help:

    - Dialogues real and […]

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    uthaker and Profile picture of unstoppableunstoppable are now friends 1 year ago

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago

    Thank you all for reading, commenting, rating and sharing Take My Coat. I wouldn’t have asked for than 1000 views in two weeks :)

    In a spirit of sharing my experience, here is the tip on writing that has worked […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago

    Folks,
    I am writing this note in a hope that novice writers, like myself, get a tip from my first experience:
    - Curb your excitement of posting the story without doing Nth revision. Reread and rewrite. Remove […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Kirby Bob Understands Heaven 1 year ago

    What a beautiful poetry in form of a prose! I lived a five year old and felt a mother of five year old. You are a story teller!

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    uthaker commented on the post, My Not-So-Big Break 1 year, 1 month ago

    I absolutely love your writing style and as I have said before you are unstoppable in your humour:)

    - Utpal

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Hi Sherry,
    I am glad you liked the story :)

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Hey Unstoppable,
    When is your next story coming out. Have you submitted already? I am looking forward to your work.
    Currently, I am expanding Take My Coat.
    Ciao,
    Utpal

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Thanks you Ranstone! I need feedback like this one to improve my story. I have edited the story based on most of your comments as well as few others’. I also added a little more of context regarding how and why of […]

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Thank you so much Rimzhim. For a fledgling writer your encouraging words are inspiring.

    I am fine-tuning this story and hope to repost it if possible.
    Thank you again,
    Utpal

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Thanks a lot Anita! I am eager to read your comments tonight.
    Thanks again for taking time to review my story.
    Cheers,
    Utpal

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Thank you sir for your encouraging review. I am also keen on getting any constructive feedback.
    For a first time writer your kind note means a lot to me, thanks again!

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    uthaker commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago

    Fellow writers,
    Can I edit and repost the story?
    Also looking for any kind volunteer to help me proof read (grammes and sentence structure) this story.
    Thanks a lot,
    Utpal

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