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ranstone72 commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey UT,
Yes, I got the link from FB. Revisit a couple places and see if you can reword:
Chapter 2 – third para – The
Chapter 2 – fourth para last line – Katya
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ranstone72 commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago
The second time I read the script and I realized how easily yet with absolute beauty and creativity, you have managed to show Humor, Emotional highs and lows, Hope and above all Generosity in your […]
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ranstone72 commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago
Nice story. I agree with other’s you can make it a Novella. Funny names of the characters. I love Buxton.
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