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jls685 wrote a new post, Tom Grilligan 5 months ago
He had taken all kinds of pictures. Pictures of plants, birds, beasts, you name it, Tom Grilligan had caught it.
Tom Grilligan was a man with nothing particularly interesting about him. He had brown hair, brown […] -
jls685 wrote a new post, Loneliness Never Hurt Anyone 5 months ago
Lawrence Tomlin got up at nine o’clock in the morning. He brushed his teeth, making sure to reach behind his bottom and top layers, smiled at himself in the mirror to make sure that his teeth were not getting […]
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jls685 wrote a new post, Veteran’s Day 5 months ago
It was November 12th 2012, the day that we were celebrating as Veteran’s Day. I was outside a small coffee shop near the University I was attending, drinking coffee and reading. There was a group of college […]
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jls685 commented on the post, prologue of my novel 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m sorry that I have to leave a negative reply but I don’t think you should be writing in English (if it is indeed your second language, which it seems to be) if you do not yet understand that “I” has to be […]
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jls685 commented on the post, Tom Grilligan 1 year, 1 month ago
Please comment and vote all criticism will be greatly appreciated.
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jls685 commented on the post, Sisyphus 1 year, 1 month ago
A great story, sorry but I cannot offer very much constructive criticism seeing as you are a much better writer than I am. So I’ll just write compliments. I liked the way you described the scenery, the amount of […]
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jls685 commented on the post, Dane’s Steer 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey great story Mrs. Leavitt, it actually made me tear up a little bit this time. I think you have whittled it down to the point where it is just right. If it can emotionally effect me then it must be something […]
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