became to have a nosebleed frequently.

nicely penned

We have authors ranging from 15 years to 60 years, but we dont judge anyone on the basis of their age. So Please avoid such type of criticism.

@adwaitkumarsingh – What do you mean by this? Please remember we only take positive criticism, never use any negative comments, so just keep this in mind.

I took a lot of time to read this story as it was quite longest among ur other but again nicely penned i enjoy reading ur wrk:)

of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)

nicely penned was so natural and simple in its keep writing:)

According to me, the beginning shouldn’t be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.