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barun wrote a new post, Father and son 5 months ago
When will he throw away his toys in the basement? When will he start differentiating between what is right and wrong? When will he grow up? The answers don’t come swiftly for a learning father like me.
“Papa, […]
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barun wrote a new post, A time to say goodbye 5 months ago
The sky was unambiguously clear and the sun was on its full swing but inside him a thunder storm was cutting its own umbilical cord. A squeaking melody leaked from his rocking chair matching the motion of to and […]
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barun wrote a new post, The second paragraph 5 months ago
“What a perfect couple!”
John and Maggie Simpson’s neighbors complimented them time and again. They had been joyfully wedded for eleven years. All their acquaintances praised their triumphant matrimony and some […]
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barun commented on the post, The second paragraph 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you
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barun commented on the post, Chicken or Egg? 1 year, 3 months ago
awesome one. brilliant reasoning !!! keep it up sir
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barun commented on the post, Bad Temper or Nail the Fence 1 year, 3 months ago
i like the moral of the story
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barun commented on the post, A time to say goodbye 1 year, 4 months ago
thank you so much
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barun commented on the post, What’s your one wish? 1 year, 4 months ago
wonderful concept. gentle writing.
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barun commented on the post, Midnight Rose 1 year, 4 months ago
Sure thing Aubree. Happy writing.
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barun commented on the post, Midnight Rose 1 year, 4 months ago
For Barnett:
The first few paragraphs are in present tense. Then it suddenly switches past tense. Then onwards, there’s a mix of past and present. There’s no harm in healthy criticism. Right? -
barun commented on the post, Midnight Rose 1 year, 4 months ago
The sentence structure seems to swing haphazardly between present tense and past tense. Not that I’m a perfect writer myself, but there should have been a stable sentence structure. Good effort none the less.
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barun commented on the post, the way to hell 1 year, 4 months ago
A lot of lines in the early paragraphs started with “He”s. But the last paragrapgh was awesome
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barun commented on the post, The Container of Souls 1 year, 4 months ago
awesome. reminded me one of the stories from edgar allan poe
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barun commented on the post, CEDAR GROVE 1 year, 4 months ago
the way all the minute details have been explained is shrewd. good writing
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barun commented on the post, Father and son 1 year, 4 months ago
thank u all. each and every word of ur appreciation is dear 2 me.
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barun commented on the post, Father and son 1 year, 5 months ago
actually i don’t hav a son in real life. i’m just 26. thanks 4 da appreciation.
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