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anita2charles commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year ago
Hey UT,
Story reads quite smooth now. I see your humour is getting better. LOL when I read Buxton’s reactions to Ramhorn. You are funny UT. Keep writing. When are you posting next chapter (remember, you promised […] -
anita2charles commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago
Utpal,
I emailed you my comments. Made some suggestions.
Cheers,
Anita -
anita2charles commented on the post, Take My Coat 1 year, 1 month ago
It’s a great site!
I loved your style of writing comedy. One of the good stories and I liked the central theme of a coat.
Let me try your questions:
- The ending is good for mass readers. You can chop off the […] -
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