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God: The Ultimate POWER…

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November 22nd 2011  |  23  |  Category: Other , True Stories  |  Author: Jaspreet  |  782 views

“Where is the money going…???” shouted his mother at top of her voice. You better tell me if you are using it for personal, otherwise I am going to give you hard time Roger! Expressionless and shocked Roger was all in sweat as he never saw his mother going crazy like this!

A small atheist family living in the centre of town, which recently started earning success, was now in everyone’s eye! Their success was spreading like fire in the town! “How come; just how come they started living such lavish life in few months!” was the question all over…

This small, happy family was now in the trap! Initially it was only Rs. 10 or Rs. 20 which use to fly away from their house but slowly it became Rs. 500 and then Rs. 1000…!!!

The lady of the house was now bothered and started questioning both of her sons! She uses to scream at them stating “it’s your father’s hard earned money which you are stealing!” until she discovered the tore currency papers laying waste outside the gallery of her home!

She was now sure that it is not her children, as they will use money for themselves and will never waste it! The day she realized this, she purposely kept a Rs. 500 note in her wallet, kept it under her pillow and went to sleep with all her senses working if someone tries to play dirty prank. The next day when she woke up and saw the purse, it was empty! Soon she rushed out and again saw piece of currency papers lying out her balcony! Now she was scared of things happening at her home!

She did not discuss this with her sons thinking they will get scared; and thus shared it with a very senior person of the colony. He, as usual did not trusted her stating “it’s all rubbish”! The next day to verify, he gave her a note with his signature on it to keep in her wallet! But the note was intact as it was. She became furious and emphasized that something really fishy is going at her home! The next day she kept a Rs. 10 note in her wallet under his vigilance and told him to keep watch and to the senior person’s surprise the note was lying outside her balcony tore in pieces!

This was beyond the understanding of science and he recommended her to meet the Cleric! She had to unwillingly take shelter of The Ultimate! Cleric suggested holy procession at her home! During the sacred procession again the money incident happened and never after that!

Till date the entire family bow in front of “The Ultimate” and have a separate Holy Room for their morning and evening prayers…

 

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23 Responses to God: The Ultimate POWER…

  1. Jagrit Gupta says:
    November 22, 2011 at 5:15 pm

    Thats a nice one Jassi, it seems we have good authors all around us.. Just instead of Roger, Rohit would have been better.

    Another point you ended the story very soon, could have elaborated it. It was very interesting story.

  2. Kunal says:
    November 22, 2011 at 6:53 pm

    Nice effort Jassi! Horror story me thodaa aur horror punches dene the naa…. :-)

    • Jaspreet says:
      November 23, 2011 at 10:57 am

      Thank u very much Kunal Sir. Would have definitely added, but being novice in the field dint gt enough thoughts! In fact its an actual incidence which happened with my neighbors and thus wrote what ever I saw! (No punches…lol…) Will definitely keep ur suggestion. In fact m plannin hncfrth bfr uploadin nethn I ll gt d proof readin done by u… Wht sayz…???

  3. Ruhani says:
    November 22, 2011 at 9:21 pm

    Very nice story Jass… u have penned down in very simple words….The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss….:)

  4. Rimzhim says:
    November 23, 2011 at 7:22 am

    Nice story Jaspreet…. I like reading true horror stuff… Keep it up:)

  5. Jaideep says:
    November 23, 2011 at 8:41 am

    Good Work Jaspreet… Keep the good work coming up.. :)

  6. Vivek says:
    November 23, 2011 at 8:48 am

    Truly Said – GOD has the ultimate power … nicely written. Good work

  7. Avatar of Ami Ami says:
    November 23, 2011 at 9:29 am

    gud job. well done, nice story.

  8. Avatar of akshaykumar says:
    November 23, 2011 at 12:13 pm

    It is very interesting story and very surprisingly. Well done jaspreet keep it up. I am waiting your next story. I hope, you will post your next story quickly.

  9. Avatar of Robby Robby says:
    November 25, 2011 at 8:57 am

    Its a nice story.. if you would have given a different title (some scary one) could have made a different impact altogether…

  10. Priyanka says:
    November 30, 2011 at 10:00 am

    Good work jass…really enjyng…

  11. chanchal says:
    December 8, 2011 at 6:14 am

    Good effort “Jaspreet”…i like it very much

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